Becca was the winner!!!!! she had a great suspenful story about someone being kidnapped! Then again she was the only one who entered.
But... never mind that! She has become very wealthy and famous for her submission i will assure you that!!!!!!
Here is her story.....
The Arrow
Written By,Becca
"Police Department, How may I help you?"
"It's my daughter, she's gone! Kidnapped!!!"
"Say it slower, Please."
Said the lady answering calls at the police department.
"My daughter is gone. I think she was kiddnapped... NOW HELP HER!!!"
"Calm down, we'll be right there."
The woman answering the calls turned around and yelled,
"Marcy!" Marcy came running, her fists pumping hard.
"What is it?"
"A little girl, the third house on Chesnut street, Kidnapped."
Of course, Marcy acted quickly. She put on her coat, for it was cold in the cellar, and went down to the room where the police men were eating.
"Time for work!"
She yelled, grabbing their gear. She told them what happened and they got in their cars, and drove off, sirens blaring. They drove down to Chesnut Street and burst open the door, to find the mom. DEAD.
Becca wins! Yay! check out he new contest!
Becca, see me later for prize.
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Thank you! Thank you! I would like to say I have worked through sweat and tears to finish that lovely story!
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